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TigerLily
Erie SeaWolf
Erie SeaWolf
TigerLily


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Number of posts : 1848
Age : 35
Location : Michigan
Favorite Current Tiger(s) : How do I choose?
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Registration date : 2007-11-30

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PostSubject: Contest Entry   Contest Entry Icon_minipostedSat Apr 12, 2008 2:14 am

First of all, this has, sadly, nothing to do with the Tigers.

So, I had to write something called a 'relationship essay' for my English class this semester. Got an A on it and then my teacher wanted me to submit it to a local creative writing contest, which was a bit of a shocker.

http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=55231314&blogID=377156724

I posted it on my blog because I wasn't sure about just posting the whole thing here, as it would be unreadable.

Just looking for some second opinions so tell me what you think. (And don't worry about being brutally honest. I can take it, I swear.)


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swiss_tiger
Erie SeaWolf
Erie SeaWolf
swiss_tiger


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Number of posts : 1760
Age : 53
Location : Switzerland
Favorite Current Tiger(s) : Inge, Inge, Inge and hhmmm Inge. ;-)
Reputation : 2
Registration date : 2007-10-05

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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry   Contest Entry Icon_minipostedTue Apr 15, 2008 5:44 am

Hey Lily
I just read your text twice and i liked it very much! applaud

I might not be the perfect person to review this 'cause english is not my mother language... obviously. Wink

But somehow i really could connect to this and i think it is written brilliantly! Despite the fact that it's a short text, i totally could dive into the atmosphere and the thoughts of your main character.

I definitely think you should submit this to a writing contest!
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TG
Detroit Tiger
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TG


Female
Number of posts : 8073
Age : 31
Location : Rockwood, Michigan
Favorite Current Tiger(s) : I don't even know anymore.
Reputation : 7
Registration date : 2007-10-05

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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry   Contest Entry Icon_minipostedTue Apr 15, 2008 8:34 am

Wow. Thats really good. Awesome job on it.
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TigerLily
Erie SeaWolf
Erie SeaWolf
TigerLily


Female
Number of posts : 1848
Age : 35
Location : Michigan
Favorite Current Tiger(s) : How do I choose?
Reputation : 4
Registration date : 2007-11-30

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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry   Contest Entry Icon_minipostedTue Apr 15, 2008 11:26 am

Thanks you two! :back_hug:

cross fingers With any luck something will come of it. ($100 for first prize)
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swiss_tiger
Erie SeaWolf
Erie SeaWolf
swiss_tiger


Male
Number of posts : 1760
Age : 53
Location : Switzerland
Favorite Current Tiger(s) : Inge, Inge, Inge and hhmmm Inge. ;-)
Reputation : 2
Registration date : 2007-10-05

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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry   Contest Entry Icon_minipostedTue Apr 15, 2008 1:35 pm

Hey great! I'll keep my fingers crossed for you! cross fingers
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TigerLily
Erie SeaWolf
Erie SeaWolf
TigerLily


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Number of posts : 1848
Age : 35
Location : Michigan
Favorite Current Tiger(s) : How do I choose?
Reputation : 4
Registration date : 2007-11-30

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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry   Contest Entry Icon_minipostedWed Apr 16, 2008 3:15 am

swiss_tiger wrote:
Hey great! I'll keep my fingers crossed for you! cross fingers

Thank you! :back_hug:
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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry   Contest Entry Icon_minipostedThu May 29, 2008 1:40 pm

awesome essay! nice job Smile
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