TigerLily Erie SeaWolf
Number of posts : 1848 Age : 35 Location : Michigan Favorite Current Tiger(s) : How do I choose? Reputation : 4 Registration date : 2007-11-30
| Subject: Contest Entry Sat Apr 12, 2008 2:14 am | |
| First of all, this has, sadly, nothing to do with the Tigers.
So, I had to write something called a 'relationship essay' for my English class this semester. Got an A on it and then my teacher wanted me to submit it to a local creative writing contest, which was a bit of a shocker.
http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=55231314&blogID=377156724
I posted it on my blog because I wasn't sure about just posting the whole thing here, as it would be unreadable.
Just looking for some second opinions so tell me what you think. (And don't worry about being brutally honest. I can take it, I swear.)
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swiss_tiger Erie SeaWolf
Number of posts : 1760 Age : 53 Location : Switzerland Favorite Current Tiger(s) : Inge, Inge, Inge and hhmmm Inge. ;-) Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2007-10-05
| Subject: Re: Contest Entry Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:44 am | |
| Hey Lily I just read your text twice and i liked it very much! I might not be the perfect person to review this 'cause english is not my mother language... obviously. But somehow i really could connect to this and i think it is written brilliantly! Despite the fact that it's a short text, i totally could dive into the atmosphere and the thoughts of your main character. I definitely think you should submit this to a writing contest! | |
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TG Detroit Tiger
Number of posts : 8073 Age : 31 Location : Rockwood, Michigan Favorite Current Tiger(s) : I don't even know anymore. Reputation : 7 Registration date : 2007-10-05
| Subject: Re: Contest Entry Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:34 am | |
| Wow. Thats really good. Awesome job on it. | |
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TigerLily Erie SeaWolf
Number of posts : 1848 Age : 35 Location : Michigan Favorite Current Tiger(s) : How do I choose? Reputation : 4 Registration date : 2007-11-30
| Subject: Re: Contest Entry Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:26 am | |
| Thanks you two! With any luck something will come of it. ($100 for first prize) | |
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swiss_tiger Erie SeaWolf
Number of posts : 1760 Age : 53 Location : Switzerland Favorite Current Tiger(s) : Inge, Inge, Inge and hhmmm Inge. ;-) Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2007-10-05
| Subject: Re: Contest Entry Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:35 pm | |
| Hey great! I'll keep my fingers crossed for you! | |
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TigerLily Erie SeaWolf
Number of posts : 1848 Age : 35 Location : Michigan Favorite Current Tiger(s) : How do I choose? Reputation : 4 Registration date : 2007-11-30
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| Subject: Re: Contest Entry Thu May 29, 2008 1:40 pm | |
| awesome essay! nice job |
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